Beware the Forsaken: Rewrite Outline


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Beware the Forsaken

PLOT Heroine moves out to a small town and finds herself in the middle of a weird shit. Spooky thriller.

THINGIES: Weird letters. Accidents. Missing people.

OUTLINE

SCENE: PRELUDE TO A MYSTERY

Very short snippet of Heroine in the cabin with Hero, reflecting on the past few weeks of events and wondering if he is the cause. It’s directly after she fell in to the lake.

SCENE: NEW HOME

Heroine moving in to town, meeting a few people, and everything is atmospherically weird.

SCENE: FIRST LETTER

Heroine finds a strange letter/note in her home.

SCENE: FIRST ACCIDENT

Heroine has issues with her car.

SCENE: CREEPY WEIRDO

Hero being kind weird and creepy.

SCENE: ADRIENNE BEING CHASED

Creepy shit in the woods leading Heroine to be chase and falling through thin ice at the lake.

SCENE: ADRIENNE REFLECTS

Once safe and warm and cleaned up in the cabin, Heroine is reflecting on the past few weeks and has some suspicions about Hero.

SCENE: CREEPY SHIT IN THE WOODS

Heroine walking in the woods to clear her head and creepy shit happens.

SCENE: KIDNAPPED

Heroine is kidnapped.

SCENE: FREAKY SHIT

Unknown place of freakyness. Hero comes to the rescue.

SCENE: HERO EXPLAINS

Hero finally confesses what he’s doing there in town. Learning about his sister and what he’s found out so far.

SCENE: FOUND BY THE BAD GUYS

Heroine and Hero get reclaimed by the freakypeeps.

SCENE: ESCAPE

Heroine saves the day with smart thinking, but possibly in a way that ends with her death.

SCENE: CLOSURE

Hero has closure about his sister.

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CHARACTERS

Adrienne : Heroine. Dark hair, brown eyes, small stature. She’s moved in to town for a job. Has parents and a sister.

Derek: Lives in a cabin out in the woods. He’s been around for about a year. His sister used to live there but then she disappeared.

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